I liked it.
Especially the montage that you put in there right after the long jump.
Wow, that guy didn't know anything
Don't let Corpse Grinder get to you. So you didn't draw any of the art yourself. It was animated damn near flawlessly. I especially liked when Ryu did his hadoken from the laying position, something I'm pretty sure he doesn't do in the game. You had a good story for such a short flash, but maybe what you want to do now is go back and start this story, since we jumped in close to the end. The only real beef that I had was with the credits. I didn't know where the music you had was from, even though I had my suspicions. Anyways, keep up the good work, look forward to seeing more.
This was great...
...but I blammed it. Not because there is anything wrong with it, like the guy before me said, this is gonna be great... when its finished. I don't like the idea of having a preview in the portal. This is probably going to make the cut either way, I just did what I did. Anyway, awesome job, and keep it up.
The worst part about this series...
... is that you can only submit two episodes a day! I need more!
Good first movie
There are two kinds of flash artists on here. First, theres the artists who submit their first flash without any polish, and it ends up looking like shit. And then theres another category. A category that you fit into. These people spend time putting work into their work, and it shows. Welcome to Newgrounds.
This wasn't bad for your first movie. It was probably a lot better than mine. The only problem that I saw was the static background. I'm familiar with that background, and because I'm aware that the waterfall is supposed to move in back of it, it was a little dissapointing that it didn't. It may seem annoying to have to go and rip all those backgrounds just to have something like that, but it really does add to the effect you're trying to make. Other than that, the only problems I had were the Naruto falling screen (with the blue lines that just irked me), and the finale, with both characters fighting off screen. You'll probably end up going pretty far, just take your time from here on out. Congrats!
For a preview
It was pretty good. Hey, hit me up with some information for voice acting, maybe I'll contribute. My email is Kaosbrightblade@yahoo.com .
My one wish
Is that I could draw and animate as well as you do. You seriously have this unbridled ability that i'd near-kill to have. Congratulations, and I can't wait for the next one.
Good choices = Good movie
Your story was very good. Points for that.
Your music was excellent, I love evanescence, so even seeing the title made me want to give you a good score. The violence was well done. You didn't overdo it, which is good. And the style comes back to the story. I like how emotional the characters were. That the girl was distraught enough to kill the guy she loved because he had hurt her so. Good job, and keep em comin.
As it should be
This is just how I'd imagine a near-perfect flash. This is the kind of flash that I strive to make. Your selections of music, backgrounds, sound effects... everything is just dead on. Your story is very appealing as well. I'm surprised that you haven't nabbed a higher score, because I would have figured I'd be seeing you on the front page. Good luck with everything, and keep up the good work.
I've been kind of wondering the same thing regarding publicity. I'm just guessing that maybe it's because of the name that most people just don't bother to see what it is. This is my opinion of course.
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